12.12.2006

Poetry 365: Waning Phase

and you find an army of men,
crawling on your skin,
building a city under glass domes.

The cranes moving all the dirt
from pile to pile keep you up
all night. But then again,
it's always night.

Glory, glory moonmen.

1 comment:

Nervda said...

Here's the poem as I originally wrote it. I decided that it was better with a little pruning:

Suppose you are the moon
and you find an army of men,
crawling on your skin,
building a city under glass domes.

Suppose the cranes moving all the dirt
from pile to pile keep you up
all night. But then again,
it's always night.

Suppose it's all a monument
to their ego: a tower of Babel.
Glory, glory moonmen.
Cry quietly over your loss of privacy.